I walked on road. Lonely in the dark on the way to someone. Someone that nobody except I know. She haven't talked to someone except me in five years. I am the only one she trusts.
I'm standing outside the door of the old ugly house. I'm looking over my shoulders to see if someone is fallowing me. I knocked on the door and waited. After a minute she opened the door. She looked at me and said "I daren't stay long, I just had to see you"
Well done!
SvaraRaderaLook at these sentences. What's wrong?
"I walked on road."
"She haven't talked to someone except me in five years"
I walked on the road.
SvaraRaderaShe hasn't talked to someone except me in five years.