fredag 24 januari 2014

Random writing nr 1

I walked on road. Lonely in the dark on the way to someone. Someone that nobody except I know. She haven't talked to someone except me in five years. I am the only one she trusts. 
I'm standing outside the door of the old ugly house. I'm looking over my shoulders to see if someone is fallowing me. I knocked on the door and waited. After a minute she opened the door. She looked at me and said "I daren't stay long, I just had to see you"

2 kommentarer:

  1. Well done!

    Look at these sentences. What's wrong?
    "I walked on road."
    "She haven't talked to someone except me in five years"

    SvaraRadera
  2. I walked on the road.
    She hasn't talked to someone except me in five years.

    SvaraRadera